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Inspiration, Poems, Letters etc.

Postby Anuren » Sun Jan 31, 2010 6:53 am

I was considering how I could relate my experience so far with you all and how to participate a little more, in the forum.
I've received so much, so here's to some sharing.... :)

it cannot be done,
with fingers on 'board,
turning wild rivers,
into a fjord.

making mad letters,
sound like a chord,
love.....its expression,
can not be absorbed.

every good morning He gives me a taste,
a touch that's so gentle,i don't rush to haste,
in case this bright moment,
is led to its waste.

His wisdom astounds me,
this plan that He weaves,
to gently free ego,
from all he perceives.

each day i see now...just what He's planning,
gently preparing for ego's unmanning,
slowly, small doses His presence is known,
finally some day the ego'll be blown.

how do i tell them,
be patient be still,
the waiting and trusting,
'til all see His will

the battle, the battle, Dear Ahn is Your fight,
the war and its victory by all of Your might,
i love You, i love You, please take me home...
the ego is fearing, being on it's own.

i care not this madness,
and those who would blame,
who'd bring this arrangement,
to nothing but shame.

the words and the letters,
are chains with its fetters,
to only decieve you,
make things seem better...

oh wanderer oh seeker
oh brother and friend,
the ego is waiting,
to be with it's End.

but don't be disheartened,
through sorrow and strife,
'cause all Ahn is doing,
is giving you Life.

By: Inspiration.
Fingers: mine.
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Re: Inspiration, Poems, Letters etc.

Postby roage » Sun Jan 31, 2010 4:25 pm

It is amazing the art that can flow as soon as we learn to let.

Awesome!
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Re: Inspiration, Poems, Letters etc.

Postby 7xFR00PAL00Px7 » Sun Jan 31, 2010 11:58 pm

Throw your constructive criticism my way. My little brother, age 11, drew me a picture of a sword and a shield and as a response, I wrote him something, so far as reciprocity is concerned. For me my trust in God allows for me to write with the feeling that the words just fly onto the paper, so I wrote, and continued to write that of a creative-poetic like writing and this is what I ended up with.

The Sage

I have but entailed a simple test for you; surely with your understanding you may pass such a test. Is it not wisdom which keeps the sinful desires of man in a cage forever? Men have had no strength since his creation; he has proved such a statement on his first act of defiance. Strength has never been a gift but has always been acquired through toil & trouble. It has been taken from the fiery furnace, which takes hands & feet of swift courage and a heart which can keep his fear contained in but a prison, locked away & far from the heart, in a place long forgotten by the man who has cast it out.
Surely it is wisdom which holds the tongue, the part of the man capable of corrupting his entire being.
Surely it is wisdom which keeps hatred & anger alike in chains, so that it may see nothing more than the darkening blackness of the pit, in which the ancient embodiment of evil may engulf it forever, only to find that it will leave the half empty gorge of his stomach far from reaching his fill, so that evil may never be satisfied nor fulfilled!
So, I dare you to try and break as wild a beast as wisdom, for she may protect & soothe your soul & mind forever . . . but with her might she has never been easy to tame since time began. Her body is rippled with strength unimaginable by the man who breaks her. He struggles & fails again and again, but with faith as his shield and integrity as the hilt upon which his righteous blade sits steadfast & truthful, no creature on the Earth too fearless or too forceful shall ever bear the name of victory but that wise sage who tamed his own heart.
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Re: Inspiration, Poems, Letters etc.

Postby 7xFR00PAL00Px7 » Tue Feb 02, 2010 1:46 pm

I was hoping you guys would see that and tell me it sucked so I can learn from whatever mistakes I made in that quote I made,

I would appreciate it. :]
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Re: Inspiration, Poems, Letters etc.

Postby 7xFR00PAL00Px7 » Tue Feb 02, 2010 8:08 pm

AIGHT ITS TIME FOR MA RAP ATTACK

the world, it sees what cannot be seen,
it places its locks on the unseen foreseen,
ITS A DREAM!
This mean machine in which those known as keen roam free and lean, unaware of what makes them truly shout with glee,
Well let's see HIS FACE!
WE CAN'T IT'S TOO DARK a place where you can't win the race between those keeping a pace and those whom we left at the gate,
It's just FATE for these men, for these women, for they have all escaped the inescapable,
the one and only who can truly create,
GET A CLUE!
These oblivious foos are but walking taboos in which the sorrow, the fear, both rendezvous
ITS TRUE that we too lost sight of the truth, and yet we both remain helpless slaves to this game of shame,
MAN ITS LAME!

And here we sit, while it seems fit that this sh** feels hopeless, why wipe down with soap less we feel like gaining less?
THAT IS until we each have finally confessed,
and yet my ego whispers that the very Man we mistakenly felt has turned his back,
My soul says in dispute WELL IN FACT indeed the night thief who attacks to outlast too true and too fast, but never lacks and HAHA DID I MENTION HE'S STILL been keeping track?
he's recorded this whole thing before we even knew he was king while he sings he sees we're all oblivious because of
too much WORSHIPPING THE BLING,
We in error still believe IT'S WHAT REIGNS SUPREME AS KING
it never errs it never stops in his method of bottom to tops, it's a surprise that to us all seemed too late,
yet here he is knowing what it was we call fate,
for was it not the Earth who happened to be his first mate?
Man the one word we can't define is late is never too late!

Ha that was fun. :]
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Re: Inspiration, Poems, Letters etc.

Postby roage » Wed Feb 03, 2010 11:21 am

Break it down! ooo ee ooo ee ooo ee oooooo! :)
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Re: Inspiration, Poems, Letters etc.

Postby 7xFR00PAL00Px7 » Thu Feb 04, 2010 11:14 pm

HAHA AIGHT ROAGE IMA PUT DA LIMELIGHT ON YOU BRUDDAH THROW IN SOME IMPROVISATION RAP DOO EET

uhh uhh what what ;D
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Re: Inspiration, Poems, Letters etc.

Postby roage » Thu Feb 04, 2010 11:23 pm

7xFR00PAL00Px7 wrote:HAHA AIGHT ROAGE IMA PUT DA LIMELIGHT ON YOU BRUDDAH THROW IN SOME IMPROVISATION RAP DOO EET

uhh uhh what what ;D


I would end up sounding like Blondie.
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Re: Inspiration, Poems, Letters etc.

Postby 7xFR00PAL00Px7 » Fri Feb 05, 2010 12:21 am

DON'T LET YOUR EGO UNDERMINE YOUR AWESOMENESS, YOU MADE THIS SITE! ;D let your mustache direct you LOL
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Re: Inspiration, Poems, Letters etc.

Postby particlepopin » Fri Feb 05, 2010 4:22 am

7xFR00PAL00Px7 wrote: ;D let your mustache direct you LOL


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